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the 23 year me would have called me psychotic, but the 28 year old me and the 16 year me is in love with the me today

Thursday, December 01, 2005

Thin red line

She would stay awake before her finals to teach him. She would wait for him while he finished class. She would look out for him in the group. She would include him in all the sessions. She would be there besides him watching movies that did not interest her. She would cheer for him when he played. She would be interested in all his stories- his small moments of triumph. She would second guess if something was bothering him.
But this she would do for all her close friends.

She would wait for him for hours and then walk the other way when she saw him coming. She would dance with everyone else , as and when, but wait for him to ask her to dance. She would sulk if he didnot give her her rightful space but get all awkward if he singled her out in his invitation. She would travel to be with him and then pretend that his presence was incidental.

He would cancel other plans to spend time with her. He would finish faster because he knew she was waiting. He would attend classes because she was there. He would grow a beard, because she said she liked bearded men. He would introduce her to all his friends. He would make friends with her friends.He would single her out in his invitation. He would enquire about her plans before he confirmed.

Alas he would do all this for just a friend

19 Comments:

Anonymous Anonymous said...

Nice....I like the appropriate and to-the-point italicising. not-too-much, not-too-less. Perfect (italicised).

alphabet "A" is of importance....not saying more, else will spill the beans, that too online....very dangerous.

ms.thu-thu : please don't stop messaging. My sms life will be non-existent and will be even more:

deset-ed

4:23 AM  
Blogger Enemy of the Republic said...

I like this. It reads like a prose poem--the he is a quintiessential presense. The repetition of HE works quite well and I agree with the comment about that the italics give it more life. This is a good piece!

6:42 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

amazing...the best fo your works and you have got the presentation and grammer just about brilliantly...

9:20 PM  
Blogger that girl in pink said...

lovely piece lemon! rings so bloody true!! and you've written it beautifully. gotta agree with anonymous above, this is definitely hall-of-fame worthy.

will see you soon and discuss at length.

love!

4:14 PM  
Blogger lemontree said...

anonymous (a): thanks! and for a paranoid online user aren't you giving way too much of my life away ;)

CV: thanks for coming by. glad you liked the piece.

anonymous (MTT): Thank you. And since you know how difficult it is for me to get the grammar etc. just right youd appreciate it more hehe

pink: thanks and so look forward to the discussion!

6:03 PM  
Blogger DiTtY said...

Dang it!!! Let's find all those men who don't know where to draw the line and just shoot them or something! :)

Loved this post, Lemontree! :) Too déja vú-ish! :)

1:05 PM  
Blogger lemontree said...

ditty: So have my list ready to contribute to that line up (laughs)

thanks for putting me in your bloggroll!

5:47 PM  
Blogger Jenn said...

Um, why didn't she tell he how she felt?

1:36 PM  
Blogger velvetgunther said...

Hey this is very good! I couldnt have put this in words...and thanks for your comment!

6:50 PM  
Blogger A and A said...

Nice post I must say!!! I have a feeling you out down what almost all of us would have gone through at some point of time in our lives. Well written! :)

9:42 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Its simple! she is trying to get all the attention she could and he is just pretending, to get into her pants.

9:57 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

lemontree
why have you not written for so long. Now, that I am getting on to blogging, and check your blog everyday, you have stopped writing as often.
write more regularly, even if it is just a one-liner!
desert-ed

3:02 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

lemontree
did you go for the delhi blogger meet? I am surprised you have not blogged about it.

ms.TT: why this silence. get over the new nickname (ha ha for once you have been given a nicname and not just you calling others names).
I am sure your fingers are aching to sms me. so you can give up on being so Ms. Uptight!

Others reading this messgae -- sorry for making this like a personal chit-chat, just that ms. TT is pretending to be upset with me, I know she is quite amused with the name. this is the only way I can communicate with her, through a common blog that we read almost daily.

desert-ed

3:47 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

lemontree
did you go for the delhi blogger meet? I am surprised you have not blogged about it.

ms.TT: why this silence. get over the new nickname (ha ha for once you have been given a nicname and not just you calling others names).
I am sure your fingers are aching to sms me. so you can give up on being so Ms. Uptight!

Others reading this messgae -- sorry for making this like a personal chit-chat, just that ms. TT is pretending to be upset with me, I know she is quite amused with the name. this is the only way I can communicate with her, through a common blog that we read almost daily.

desert-ed

3:47 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

tt why dont you just give-in? what does tt stand for anyays, that's upsetting you so much?

do either of you -- desrted or tt have a blog?

3:49 AM  
Blogger lemontree said...

jenn: an important question. let's just say she grew up on a diet of jane austen and vikram seth and wanted to be wooed and rescued. a romantic fool. and so by the time she was willing change the rules and give up her pride it was a bit too late. and maybe all for the best

velvetgunther: thank you :) and also for coming by

wishfulthinker: awwww. the best thing about the most personal experiences is that they are universal

anonymous: hope that wasn't the case. actually it wasn't the case at all. believe me i was there. and please don't prick my balloon. ;)thanks

anonymous (a):hi! will blog soon. how come you havent written anything on your just created blog. is the link still not working.
did go for the bloggers meet but not inspired to write
ms tt went as well :)

anonymous (last): miss tt and deserted (a) both have blogs.
miss tt's blog is www.leafyriver.blogspot.com (she doesnt write very often) and deserted is still to make his first contribution to his blog which is www.karmicallybound.blogspot.com

will not risk giving out the full form of tt- but if you check some of the previous comments you will come across it for sure.

and gently wanted to point out to tt is only 5 years elder than deserted - so can the 4 year old and 9 year old please grow up.

12:55 PM  
Blogger Jenn said...

Of all the words of tongue or pen,
The saddest are these:
It might have been...

I routinely tell guys I like them or ask them out. Call it emancipation, but it's more like impatience. I want whatever I want to happen, like yesterday!

Have already arm twisted one friend into getting enough nerve to ask a guy she fancied out. (I blogged about that).

You know, I think guys are just as nervous about asking us out, or making assumptions which you could throw in their teeth very cruelly.

Take the bull by the horns: "Hey, wanna have a coffee with me? PS: I kinda like you."

10:07 AM  
Blogger lemontree said...

Hi Jenn
That some very sane advice.
Only if I had known you before.
Like 5 years back.
But having missed that opportunity, its a lesson learnt the hard way. Now if I like someone I would go all out and say that (atleast thats what i think)
But alas long time since me liked anyone :(
Though did it work out for your friend?

10:16 AM  
Blogger Jenn said...

He said yes to coffee, but warned that he already had a girlfriend. So she begged off. However, the act of asking liberated her. She was walking around, hyperventilating (I kid you not, I wanted to squash a brown paper bag to her face) whenever we bumped into him, and actually coming out and asking for what she wanted was like a weight off her chest. She was on a high for a week.

9:39 AM  

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